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Texts with coherence and consistency errors

The text that transcribed below belongs to a technical school student of 4th year night shift.
The slogan of the activity was to create a narrative from the selection of 10 vocabulary words given by the professor related to chapter IX of the Odyssey.
The words highlighted in yellow are those chosen by the student to develop his text.


"The man was overwhelmed and had worked overtime, but that did not stop to order your home. Then he sat on his cane Wattles, comfortable look Ariba to jubilant smile in spite of what he had spent yesterday morning. In a noise that it felt roar, he abruptly got up and ran his office asia noting that he had not anyone take a book from his desk, touching Boreas wind went through his window, the hill and then look the book that I had never seen, was something crass , looking at the cover was fixed was the author who was Paralis, was the illustrious man yesterday morning, this vajo saver quickly and in this lush Arvol , I'll kill you right there. "

Analysis errors
Students know the importance of accents, as it does not put them anywhere in the text.
addition to the most amazing misspelled as "Ariba" "above", "spite" and "despite", "asia" with "towards" or the incredible "vajo" to "down", we noticed the following errors the use of the words: "... joyful despite what had happened yesterday morning" (adverb to be used as deictic)
"felt a loud noise ..."
"Boreas wind .. went through his window, the hill and then look at the book that I had never seen "

With regard to cohesion, the student knows or uses only point and coma. Ignores the concept of prayer, and intuitively placed points. Abuses commas.

The text is confusing. The character is at home, and reportedly has an office there, because when you hear the noise she runs. If so, it was normal that if anyone knew or not, hence the term "notice" is inappropriate. A "note" which is unusual.
What had happened "yesterday"? Is the wind Boreas "passed" or " entered " out the window?
Anyway, it commits a crime and do not know why.